lol nice song kid
but you're gonna need to take some more time and practice first. and try to use more than one syllable. oh and learn to rap too, that might help. nice try tho.
the game gon laugh at you when u get off the net and jump in the real world
lol nice try Timmy XD Your washed up kid. Theres a reason your leaving and its because no one cares about you. No one even knows you. Here we are 7:53 am and you cant sleep cause im all you can think about fat kid. Your gonna need a life time of practice to sound half as good as me, amatuer. Try learning how to rhyme words you illerate disgusting fat pale piece of shit. You mad cause me and hyliss laughed at your bummy pics when you AIM'd her about you wanting to love her hahAHAHAHAHA im sorry tubby but it was too funny. You need to do your homework timmy, Youve bin gone for years and things are very different now. Im hip hop NG's #1. The guy who murdered over 49 rappers on this comical site. You could take lessons from people who look up to me you fat fart.
Try to not run out of breathe when you try to rap like reven your girlfriend. Look at yourself in the mirror and ask yourself if you dont look like something the real world laughs at you depressed sexually frustrated bummy broke bitch hahaha. Looks like you share every loser's denial huh you fat chump? hahahaha
The Game gon laugh at those pink chunky cheeks when you step in there and say you can rap. I can see your pathethic ass right now running out of your breathe after u spit half a bar LMFAO!!!! You dont even get respect on the net much in the real world. Im good unlike you and your girlfriend little Lui.
2 Broke ass kids looking like the fucking Ren n Stinpy of the south HAHAHAHAHAHA
The truth hurts kid, pop a pain pill amatuer.
Next you wanna diss someone learn how to rap first you doofy fat pig face. Pig fucking sexually frustrated chunky chipmunk. You speaking to an Almighty you silly in the face lookin doofy white kid LMFAO Its misfits like you who make legendary rappers like eminem look bad. Pathethic real world underachievers. Look at the bright side your life wont last long with Little Lui cause his ass is so broke he starving and one day he gon hit your pig flab ass over the head and when you knocked out he gon fry you and eat you so he can live another day you faaaaaaaaaaT Fuuuuuuuuuukk~.
Little Kid youza joke b i saw your picture dont make me show everyone ill hurt your feelings. Read about me, I enjoy fucking peoples lives up =D
REAL Ova fake
WE RuN THiS SHiiiiiiiiiT!!!
I thought about hitting you with the IRON
but why bother when your just 1 big mac away from Die'in
thanx for givin me the full one...let this also serve as documentation im spittin on it so none of these ng kids ruin it by tryin to rap
not bad kiki
i like how u flipped the sample off of platinumloops(or sampletank-i forget) but the timbaland drum from the modern beats free kit is a little plain n average u should combine more drum samples like cajete said. i like the clap n the piano but the way the timb drum rolls a lot at one doesnt fit if u ask me. and i like ur original stuff better but i cant say shit cuz a few of my beats' main melodies were sampled too[eg just 2 gutta, exposed(luis is spittin on it so it aint on ng)] but all in all not too bad keep it up
thanks...i know that i need alot of work on my drums to be better but like i said to alberto i don't have many drum samples i need to get some more but i don't know where to get them from i went lookin on the internet a few days ago but didn't have any luck
not too bad...
a lil too wierd for me but not too bad juss sounds like video games a bit
lol thats when i had Magix Studio...they didnt hv da sounds like FL...so i stop using it
fire as fuck dood i aint gon lie but the only prollums i seen. i thot it was a collab at first cuz the piano is my boi reven's style and the sweeper pad is all cajete. otherwise not bad doe. keep it up pimpy
lol yea ppl say i hv reven cajete n 187 in me...i believe em too...thanks graff! :)
I like Karbon's work
main part I don't like is the shitty piano rest is hot tho
-187 4 life-
listen u fat cracker jack i just now realize that u are nothing like we all thought and u sayin that shyt is disrepectful son i take that in offense stay off MY Jock Nigga ~1~
its ight doe
work on dem drums and shit'll be fire
not too bad...but ur voice seems non-metal material metal needs more yelling...which is probably why I don't listen to it anymore
but anyway good lyrics and all but to appeal to the metal crowd better you should yell more(i never thot id say that)
HAHA,Thanks man. I feel where you coming from. I usually hold back a little..crowded house. The one day I get the chance to let loose, and look the hell out, you'd prolly hear me way down there in Carolina!!Thanks again man!
hmmm i like it i think u will have something to look forward to soon enuff b ez
da big boi Graff
im loving it...pain behind those strings fam not too bad
haha, thanks for stoppin by! Good to see you in production again man!
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